Teacher Feedback
A Draft of my Essay.
For a lessons in university we brought in a copy/draft of our essay in which we got feedback from our lecturer. My first draft included researched sources and analysis.
My Feedback was not to go into the topic of legality and public beliefs that lead to negative thoughts towards psychedelics, as research shows its therapeutical benefits . I didn’t remove my paragraph because I because I want to keep the point alive however didn’t invest time into reenforcing the statement.
My lecture also gave me knowledge about website academic PDFs sources on websites like…
and also a website how to Harvard reference correctly
Essay Progression
Colour coding, this was a really great tool to improve structure in the essay.
Peer Feedback,
From a question asked by a classmate I learned that my citations was in the wrong place.
Example,
Before
(Citation) “……..”
After
“……..” (Citation)
This goes to show that you shouldn’t be scared to ask a question as it could benefit the class. Its now been fixed.
Reflection
I have surprised my self, I am really happy with my improvement since collage I have found creditable sources and referenced them correctly and crafted an essay I have been really increased learning about.
I have some fishing touches to make then I have completed the essay (conclusion needs completing and bibliography needs correcting and finishing)